Hide and seek.
Liz tagged me to do this.* So it is all her fault.
1. You have to post these rules before you give the facts.
2. Players, you must list one fact that is somehow relevant to your life for each letter of your middle name. If you don't have a middle name, just make one up...or use the one you would have liked to have had.
3. When you are tagged you need to write your own blog-post containing your own middle name game facts.
4. At the end of your blog-post, you need to choose one person for each letter of your middle name to tag. Don't forget to leave them a comment telling them they're tagged, and to read your blog.
Well, I don't have a middle name, but my family have always simply called me 'Ray' for as long as I can remember, so I'm going with the second part of my name - Anne.
A. Acting out the role created for me by my place within the class system in the UK. Stuff that. I have always walked my own path and made my own choices. I suspect that my parents often thought that there had been a mix up at the maternity hospital and they had come home with someone else's child.
N. Nuns. I was lucky enough to win a scholarship to a Roman Catholic Convent High School at my 11 plus = swotty child- and I adored every minute of it. Head girl. Sack load of CGSEs. The lot. Forget horror stories of tormenting sisters, these women and the lay teachers were totally brilliant and I owe them more than I can say. And I certainly was not alone. Go Sisters of Mercy.
N. No regrets. Only look forward.
E. Education and Expectations. For many years my goal was to become a University Lecturer, and I worked hard to make that happen. The two years I spent in teaching taught ME a lot, and the students were excellent. I truly believe that without education a person can never realise their potential. Life long learning is real. [One of the reasons I support UNICEF] Education taught me that the only limits are those you set for yourself.
Since I have no friends and am a total recluse, I chose to ignore part 4 of the rules and not impose my tag on anyone else. [ see under A]
Take care world and have a good one.
*http://www.lizfenwick.blogspot.com/
What's playing on my YouTube right now? Snow Patrol http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=I7taFtKZEDA&feature=PlayList&p=10960FB742FA50ED&index=26&playnext=5&playnext_from=PL
Friday, 30 November 2007
Tag
Wednesday, 28 November 2007
Locations
I find myself struggling with how to describe the dream location for my WIP.
Imagine if you will an Austrian coffee shop. In Vienna for example.
There will be patisserie. Hand made chocolates and cakes galore. At least 10 different types of coffee. And a sunny courtyard. Newspapers and black apron waiters.
Only it has to be in London.
And I don't want to distract from the romance. Or scoff any more cake.
Must write faster. Bye.
Monday, 26 November 2007
Hero Archetype - The Swashbuckler
Sunday, 25 November 2007
Power Songs
Friday, 23 November 2007
Head down, no nonsense, mindless boogie
Thursday, 22 November 2007
Loving your characters
Wednesday, 21 November 2007
Because sometimes you just need it
Tuesday, 20 November 2007
THE FICTIVE DREAM
How to Induce the Fictive Dream
Notes from 'How to Write Damn Good Fiction: Advanced Techniques for Dramatic Storytelling,' by James N. Frey
James M. Frey, in How to Write a Damn Good Novel II, says, "As a fiction writer, you're expected to transport a reader. Readers are said to be transported when, while they are reading, they feel that they are actually living in the story world and the real world around them evaporates."
In this altered state of consciousness, the reader can become so absorbed that you must shake him to get his attention.
Absorption is probably the better word: the reader is absorbed/transported into the story world.
This experience is often called the "Fictive Dream," and that is as good a name for it as any. It's like a daydream, except that the reader isn't its author. It occurs at a subconscious level.
How do you induce the Fictive Dream?
1. Use vivid, sensual details to begin the dream state. Let your reader experience the world of the character first-hand, through the character's senses.
2. Gain the reader's sympathy for your character by making the reader feel sorry for the character. Loneliness, lovelessness, repression, embarrassment, humiliation, privation, danger--any situation that brings physical, mental, or spiritual suffering will make your reader sympathize with your character.
3. Engender reader identification with your character. Give your character a noble goal that the reader can support, and the reader will take his side, no matter how much of a slime he is or has been.
4. Create sympathy for your character by providing sensuous details in the character's environment--the sights, sounds, pains, smells, etc., that the character is feeling--that will trigger the reader's emotions.
5. Inner conflict--misgivings, guilt, doubts, remorse, indecision--will lead the reader to side with your character in the decisions he is forced to make--decisions of a moral nature that have grave consequences for the character (such as putting their honor or self-worth at stake).
Inner conflict can be thought of as a battle between two voices within the character: one of reason, the other of passion--or of two conflicting passions. One of a protagonist, the other of a protagonist. (The little devil and angel on the character's shoulder.)
These voices engage in rising conflict that comes to some kind of climax, where a decision is made that leads to action. This debate produces tension and suspense about what the character will decide to do.
This participation in the decision-making process is what transports the reader into the fictive dream state.
A lot of this advice has been stated in other classic work on creating emotive fiction, and especially genre fiction, but I find it interesting that these five elements are being proposed for ALL fiction.
Now all I have to do it make it happen. Sigh.
pic = Dream On by AndreInacu
What's playing on my YouTube right now? Damien Rice The Blower's Daughter. http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=8ThuXEDvCZk&feature=PlayList&p=4F1D642A6F9D7B46&index=49
Monday, 19 November 2007
Hero Archetype - The BAD BOY
According to Tami Cowden there are 8 main Hero Archetypes in Romantic Fiction.
I thought I would test this theory with a few examples, and today's example is:
Hero Archetype 2. THE BAD BOY
'The BAD BOY: dangerous to know, he walks on the wild side. This is the rebel, or the boy from the wrong side of the tracks. He’s bitter and volatile, a crushed idealist, but he's also charismatic and street smart.'
Um, I can think of a few hero candidates that could apply to...
Now. Back to the WIP and creating one of my own.
What's playing on my YouTube today? Annie Lennox. Cold. http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=tbC3PNH7xY4
ps. apologies for the format of the post - Blogger is playing up.
Saturday, 17 November 2007
Hottest Toy
Judy Jarvie has been blogging about the pressure on parents to find THE TOY for their child for Christmas.*
In a turn of serendipity I have just read Jenny Crusie's novella in the compilation ' SANTA BABY'.
'Trudy Maxwell goes looking for the Hot Toy of 2006 on Christmas Eve to keep her nephew's faith in Santa Claus and life in general, and runs into toy hijackers, the CIA, Chinese spies, and the lit professor who dumped her after three dates. Then the shooting starts.'
For an extract of the first chapter -http://www.jennycrusie.com/excerpt/ht_excerpt.php
Highly recommended. And a masterclass on how to cram what the reader needs to know to set up the story before the heroine meets her hero. Brilliant.
And apologies to all parents who are now going through the pain, but is this not just another part of our current cultural Zeitgeist?
And therefore, of course, all food for the writer's imagination?
Happy shopping.
* http://judyj.blogspot.com/
What's playing on my YouTube right now? SugarBabes http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=LHaE_9lkwg4&feature=related
Thursday, 15 November 2007
CHOICES
The Road Not Taken
TWO roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;
Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,
And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.
I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.
Robert Frost (1874–1963). Mountain Interval. 1920
pic - Choices by NBC Skellington
Wednesday, 14 November 2007
Garrison Keillor
"Writers get obsessed with a project and lock the doors and sit and work at it, like animals in a leg trap trying to chew through the leg, which is not good strategy.
"Walk briskly and it will improve your circulation and your brain will remember the basics of good writing: Cut to the chase. Cut the introductions. Cut the agonized introspection. When in doubt, write something that is fun. Write on a computer if you must but correct by hand on a typescript with a yellow No. 2 lead pencil."
Not surprisingly, these musings were prompted by the fact that he has a deadline for delivering another book very soon.'
I am currently chewing off my own leg with the WIP.
What's playing on my YouTube right now? Darren Hayes http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=Cb38-sewlJE&feature=PlayList&p=4F1D642A6F9D7B46&index=37
*http://timetowrite.blogs.com/weblog/2007/05/index.html
Tuesday, 13 November 2007
Lurv scenes
Is there a checklist of components you need to put it all together?
Setting.- Yes, tropical sunkissed beach. Moonlit gardens, they can help. Arabian desert. No mosquitos or sand flies or other biting insects on bare bits of course, unless someone has to kiss it better. Or you are a vampire/ chimera in a graveyard.
Sensory detail - only so much you can do without it becoming a cliche = smell 1, touch 2, skin 3, taste 4, sounds 5 [ no squidge thank you]. Repeat for hero and heroine as required.
Physical detail - imagination required to make it special instead of anatomical tab a into slot b
[see squidge above]. Paranormals have some advantages here. [ Think about it....]
Emotional detail - ah. Tricky. What has brought these two people here at this moment in time? What happened before- and what is going to happen after? How has this scene changed them?
Whether you are writing erotica or sweet romance, don't we all want to add more tenderness and, well, love, into our love scenes?
Back to character again. Always back to character.
And nobody said it was going to be easy.
What's playing on my YouTube right now? The 'kissy bit' from Lost http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=170A946s7Mg&feature=PlayList&p=10960FB742FA50ED&index=3
Monday, 12 November 2007
Hero Archetypes - the Professor
Examples? Sherlock Homes, Johnny Depp as Ichabod Crane, and Harrison Ford as Dr Jones or in 'Sabrina' is a classic - but what ab0ut
Hero Candidate: Matthew Goode.
Born April 3, 1976 in Exeter, England.
6' 2" and blue-eyed, actor Matthew Goode landed his first breakout role as Mandy Moore’s love interest Ben Calder in the romantic comedy Chasing Liberty (2004). The theatrically-trained actor followed it up with more prominent roles in Woody Allen’s Oscar-nominated Match Point (2005), Imagine Me & You (2005), Copying Beethoven (2006) and The Lookout (2007). He will star as Captain Charles Ryder in the upcoming film adaptation of Evelyn Waugh's 1945 novel, Brideshead Revisited.
Um. The Professor has potential!http://www.tamicowden.com/heroes.htm
http://chasingheroes.com/heroes/professors/
http://www.romancingtheblog.com/blog/index.php?s=hero+archetypes
What's playing on myYouTube right now? Natasha Bedingfield - I bruise easily http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=_h_bdIynqio&feature=PlayList&p=4F1D642A6F9D7B46&index=10
Sunday, 11 November 2007
Agony Aunt
Thank you Aunty Trish. I think I owe you a pint. Or two.
Saturday, 10 November 2007
THE POWER OF POSTIVE THOUGHT
Enjoying the journey. Taking pleasure in life. Waking up each day and being excited by what you are doing that day.
That. Is the toughest thing. You cannot buy positive, motivating energy.
We chose to be writers. We chose to spend our precious life doing this.
But why not make it exciting and invigorating? Even wonderful?
Motivational and Self-Help Books are everywhere and there is a HUGE Market. Just go into Amazon and you will see hundreds of titles, from ‘The Power of Positive Thinking’, which was published in 1952 right through to Paul McKenna in 2007.
Clever people observe the way we lead our lives in the western world, and how the people and events around us SUCK our energy and emotional power until we are drained and exhausted with nothing left to give to our creative side.
Buzz words include: ENERGY VAMPIRES [ the job or other people], TECHNODESPAIR [ the overwhelming battery of technology, TV, music, noise, emails and blogs], INFORMATION OVERLOAD [ mags, TV, How to books- there are so many people telling you HOW to live/lose weight/bring up the kids- but how do you choose which ones to believe?]
I find these depressing. Some people have found them very valuable.
All I am looking for are some techniques to help JAZZ me up.
Here are a few I have used and I make NO excuses for that fact that I am pathetic.
*Stolen from Jurgen Wolff who has a great site and e-bulletin. http://www.timetowrite.com/
What's playing on my YouTube right now? Nothing. Radio 3 in another room.
Friday, 9 November 2007
Things you cannot buy
FOCUS. You become the BEST you can be, by FOCUSING on one thing and working as hard as you can to build your talent and skill. Never ending improvement to be as good as you can be in that focus area.
PUSH. Pushing yourself, challenging yourself. And keep pushing. No complacency. Healthy sense of insecurity.
IDEAS. What makes you different and special? There are lots of other folk out there who have ideas which could work. What makes yours special?
PERSISTENCE through apparent Failure, and Criticism, Rejection and Pressure = [CR*P]. If you look at some of the lives and career paths of the rich and famous, it is a wonder they could get out of bed in the morning.
Thursday, 8 November 2007
Thinking Ahead
You have a talent or skill, and you can use that skill as a writer and create a business.
You are a self-employed entrepreneur. CONGRATULATIONS!
What does that mean for you as a business person?
Which is fine if your vision sets that as the limit of your business. But to GROW and BUILD that business, you may need a lot more. Start working on the skill sets you need to grow THE BUSINESS.
Think of any small business in the UK making a product for sale.
Think of the skill sets needed to run and develop that business. These could include:
DESIGNERS. They design a product to meet the needs of a particular customer. That is you - with a clear understanding of what each publisher is looking for, and how it fits with the product/ product range you want to create.
PRODUCTION. Someone makes the product according to the design agreed with the customer. That is you - the creative genius.
SALES. They talk to customers, create and initiate business ideas and sell those ideas to their customers. Then track sales. Delivery. Customer satisfaction. Do you need a Literary Agent who can be your Sales Person - an expert who knows the customers you want to sell to, and what they are looking for at the moment. The agent only earns money when you sell - so this is a win/win partnership. OR - you can do it yourself.
MARKETING AND PROMOTION. What makes you different from other writers? What makes you unique?
This is where BRANDING comes in. What is your Brand? Why should anyone in the publishing world, from the girl on the bus on the way to work, to the editor, remember and associate with you?
Oh yes – this girl specialises in Tudor Seafaring/ Paranormal Erotica. Let’s call her.
In other words, WHAT IS YOUR UNIQUE SELLING POINT?
FINANCE. Tax. Balance Sheets. Salaries. Do you need an accountant? At what point do you inform the Tax office? Do you need to start paying National Insurance to make sure you have a State Retirement Pension? Do you have your own personal pension? Health insurance [ if you cannot work and you are the only designer/manufacturer that could be a problem.] Who is going to complete my tax returns?
Wednesday, 7 November 2007
Who is your Customer?
QUESTION THREE. Who is your Customer? Who is going to buy your wonderful work?
Market Research companies would tell you that it is essential to know your customer and what they want. This is a common theme of many ‘How-to’ Books on writing. Know your Market.
To me, there are THREE levels of customers.
1. Literary Agents
2. The Submission Editors and Readers at Publishers
3. The bookseller and readers who will buy your book.
You will only reach the readers who will love your work when you pass the first two gatekeepers.
In true mythological style these folks are employed to challenge you, and make sure you are worthy of entering the golden land, sorry, worthy of time and energy and money to publish YOUR work when there are thousands of other hopefuls all lined up outside the gate.
So. How?
First. I am assuming that you doing this work yourself, so you need to use a few shortcuts to save days of time – and focus on key elements to maximise your success.
LEVEL ONE: LITERARY AGENTS
Marcus Sakey wrote an excellent article on how he carrys out his own market research on Literary agents, and you can find it here :
http://killeryear.wordpress.com/2007/08/02/the-query-go-round/
WHO are your favourite authors, where have they been published, and WHO ARE THEIR LITERARY AGENTS?
If they have an agent.
Many Harlequin MB authors do not have Literary Agents because they write solely for that publisher who has a standard contract. This makes perfect sense and means more income for the author who is quite capable of managing her own career.
WHO publishes the kind of books you love to read as a whole group/subgenre.
These are the agents who SOLD that book to that publisher for that author.
After three or four fairly boring hours, you should have a sizable list. To find their addresses, turn to the Internet.
You can Google search, using quotes around their full name.
You can also look at sites like EveryoneWhosAnyone.com and AgentQuery.com and http://www.romantictimes.com/resources_research.php?article=168 for Agents in the USA.
The Online Version of The Writers and Artists Yearbook for the UK is here:
http://www.writersservices.com/agent/index1.htm
This has the links to the websites etc and the info you need. The Yearbook is worth buying since you can search for specific genres – and there are craft sections.
LEVEL TWO: PUBLISHERS
DOES this publisher look at Un-Agented, Unsolicited Submissions?
Many do not. They want a literary agent to pre-screen the submissions for them, and love your work before they will look at it.
These editors can move of course, but there will always be submission guidelines on their website.
The publisher of the books you love will define the length of the book, the subject matter such as the subgenre, and the format of the book.
It would be pointless to send a teenage romance book to a publisher who only produces paranormal erotic e-books.
WHO is the Editor for the Book you love from that publisher?
Find out from:
* the front of the book in the acknowledgements section of a single title book
* the author’s website or blog
For a general list of Romance Publishers and Markets, go to the Internet on sites like:
http://www.karenafox.com/publishers.htm. This is a detailed resource on the US market with submission guidelines.
http://www.romantictimes.com/resources_research.php?article=174
Tuesday, 6 November 2007
Where Do You Want to Go?
Yes, I know this sounds terribly American and ‘Business-speak’ but it does make sense to think through what you want in your life and your work.
In this context ‘Vision’ means asking hard questions about:
*Where do I want to be in two years from now? Five years? Ten years?
*How far do I want to go?
*How big do you want to be?
For example:
* Do you want to write one single title book a year?
* Or three short category books a year? Or five?
* Or both? Or non-fiction and fiction?
* Or one blockbuster thriller every two years?
These flippant questions actually link to a far more fundamental one.
Why do you want to be published?
*Personal Validation? To feel significant as an individual?
*Validation as a creative person and writer?
*Validation of your talent and skill or knowledge to others?
*Because you want to hold a book you have written in your hot little hands and send copies to the people who said that you were bound to be a writer some day/ that you were a talentless fool who should stay quiet and keep serving fries?
*Because you want to tell tales and your stories to be read?
For me, the answer to that question will set the answers to the others. This is also the question some agents ask prospective clients in order to determine whether that author has a career plan and is someone they can work with in a win/win partnership.
Monday, 5 November 2007
Hobby or Career?
There is a plethora of ‘How-To’ business books for entrepreneurs in the shops at the moment, and many of them have become bestsellers.
There are common principles in most of these books, which have been reframed for a specific audience – including women.
I thought it might be interesting to look at some of the key business principles and work through how they could apply to the Fiction Writer.
QUESTION ONE.
If you want to write for yourself and love doing it – that’s brilliant, and you should be proud.
Let’s assume that you want to write fiction that you can sell to a publisher, who will GIVE YOU MONEY for the honour of putting your words onto paper inside covers and sending them out into the world.
They want to MAKE MONEY so that they can GIVE YOU MONEY.
It’s as simple as that.
Some women seem to have a problem expressing the fact that they want to make MONEY.
And I don’t think this is simply an example of British culture where we are taught that talking about money is vulgar. I think it is more widespread than that.
Congratulations. You are now in Show Business.
So. What is YOUR answer to Question One?
Saturday, 3 November 2007
And where do you get your story ideas from?
"Very busy executive would like to hire a writer to send emails on his behalf on personal dating websites. And do a few emails back and forth to get the ball rolling.
This person needs to know how to write in a masculine, but romantic way and at the same time create a challenge for the reader of the emails."
Wow. SHADES OF CYRANO DE BERGERAC?
Thursday, 1 November 2007
The hazards of sitting in front of a computer all day
I now have an entry in my diary for the annual posh Xmas company dinner evening.
Think luxurious country estate, walled gardens, a library larger than the public library in the small town where I grew up, and pampering with wonderful food and wine. Gorgeous open fires and huge sofas. Magical.
And one of the very few times in a girl's life when she has the chance to wear SERIOUS frocks and bling. Shoes with heels and thin soles. Make-up from department stores which cost more than your first wage packet.
In other words, all of the items which do not form part of normal life.
Writer's grunge. I shall say no more.
So I now have about six weeks before deciding between :
1. I have lost SO much weight and look SO fantastic that none of my current collection could POSSIBLY do the event justice -new cocktail dress, and shoes coming up!
2. This mince pie is only 100 calories. And home made are so much nicer. And yes, of course I will come along to your Xmas party and scoff sausage rolls and trifle - it would be rude not to. Those hand made fresh cream dark chocolate praline truffles are just for me? How kind.
I already have outfits - I'll be fine.
Um. Tricky one. Any ideas?
What's playing on my YouTube right now? Morning Adrenaline Power Song. Listen with coffee before writing. Repeat as necessary. Foo Fighters. The Best of You. http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=Pd_p1A7WVNs&feature=PlayList&p=5505018970D42764&index=0